January 29th, 2011, 2:27 pm

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Crystalbear January 29th, 2011, 8:31 pm

Interesting use of screentones there. Some of it is a bit sore on the eyes however, but it's a good style nonetheless.

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metaishopeless January 30th, 2011, 6:03 am

Thanks for the feedback, I am experimenting and trying new things and getting mixed messages... xD I agree I need to use the screentones more effectively and I will continue to try and figure it out...

Though for my benefit can you tell me wear the bits that are hard on the eyes are? The places that stand out to me when I concentrate on that are the walls or the skin, or maybe you mean both?

Nonetheless, thank you for the feedback. :D

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Crystalbear February 5th, 2011, 2:33 pm

Oh my, sorry for the late response.

Well, I would say the screentones that look the darkest, or on color, seem to be the hardest on the eyes. But that's just me. It's all fine either way.

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metaishopeless February 5th, 2011, 3:16 pm

lol no prob

Anyways you can see I'm trying out a different coloring/shading technique with the most recent pages, so hopefully that takes care of the problem.:D